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我翻看评论,看有说语句不通的,认真的想了一下。这应该是我没注意,用白话+普通话写的问题。
我重读了几遍文章的,也注意到一些问题。
趁着书还不是太多章节,我打算全部精修一下,整到语句通顺,合理逻辑化一些人物,丰富人物形象。
今天返修,大概率应该是更新不了。
其实有些懒得再修改。
但我有能力做更好,就没必要将就。","authorWords":{"t":""},"updateTimestamp":1653956105,"isBuy":0,"limitFree":0,"eFW":0,"ark":"","isPubliode":1,"fEnS":0},"rewardI":2,"todayt":1},"refo":{"weekt":211,"disForward":1,"disBackward":0,"rank":1021,"totaloInfo":{"montht":161,"disForward":0,"disBackward":0,"rank":5002},"checkLevel":15,"isPubliode":1,"hasSubscribe":0,"settings":"","hasLite":false,"bookActReward":{"hitU":0,"subscribeC":otF":0},"abInfo":{"abTextGroup":1}},"msg":"成功"}
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